Ira's Bevy Discussion

The official discussion post for the side story Ira's Bevy.

ADULT CONTENT!

Well, there it is, guys. Whatcha think? Worth the wait? Excited for the relaunch? Hate every syllable? Lemme know either way!

Of course we're (or at least I am) excited for relaunch! The second person POV was a little weird to me, but not a big deal.

Excited? Like you even have to ask!

Oh it's so refreshing to see Ira again~ The second person POV was a little surprising to start off with but frankly I kind of liked it!

It's interesting to hear that the second person was unexpected. In DBF 1.0 all of Ira's POVs were second person. I guess I really have been gone too long!

Just noticed...You labeled it 'Saturday Side Story' on the main page, but it's Sunday....unless you posted before midnight and I missed it.

Yep, I missed it because I'm old and was in bed before 10 last night, so never mind.

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I shall endeavor to please!

Oh man *flops over* I am super late in commenting on this since everything about the move got crazy for a while.

But enough about that! I really am enjoying what I've read so far; it's been way too long since I've gotten to read your lovely writing (especially the dirty stuff). I didn't find the second person POV jarring at all, which I have to commend you for -- usually it's something that sort of bothers me, but you handle it beautifully.

Not to mention Ira throat fucking Misha was incredibly hot. That's a favorite thing of mine, and the whole interaction between the two struck a really nice balance between rough and sweet. ^_^ I'm looking forward to reading Part Two.

Thanks, Zappaz! Glad that you're enjoying it so far. Part two is live on the site right now, and part three (with Ira/and Morgan) will probably be live sometime in the wee hours. (It got longer than I was expecting and I haven't even gotten to the dirty stuff yet.)

Isn't it always great when pieces end up being longer? I'm gonna run off and read both Part Two and Three right now. ^_^